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Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends.
Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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Bài viết mẫuNowadays, parents are keen on pushing their children towards the excellence in terms of education. As a result, they often organise extra classes for them. However, I do not believe that this is a good idea, because children need to do many other activities such as sports, or artistic activities like drawing, in order to elevate their chances to study at university, and to be more creative.
Firstly, many parents claim that children need to always improve their academic skills instead of wasting their time by doing physical activities because that will not help them in the future to be able to continue studying in prestigious universities.
Nevertheless, I am not of this opinion. For instance, in USA, universities are highly expensive. However, universities allow students who are high level athletes to study free-of-charge because they will help the sport section of the university to get developed. Consequently, it is sometimes crucial for children who do not come from wealthy family to be performant in a sport to study at university in the future.
Secondly, there are also many parents who organise extra classes for academic purposes like maths, or sciences. However, they totally reject artistic activities like drawing. In fact they think that drawing does not develop the intelligency of the children, and would rather distract them from academic topics.
Nonetheless, I firmly believe that they are not well informed about the many benefits that children could derive from drawing, and I am convinced that this activity is crucial for their own development. Indeed, many scientists have already highlighted the fact that drawing promote creativity in young children. Evidence shows that the brain is intensively stimulated when children are drawing. As a result, they become better at academic topics as they improve their concentration and creativity.
To conclude, I personally believe that children have enough education at school. As a result, I am of the opinion that parents would better to have their children doing sports and artistic activities like drawing or others, in order to take care of their development rather than always pushing them in academic topics.
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